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Open Poetry #13

Disobediance

Tessa
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 67
Ohio

0 posted 2001-04-26 09:16 PM

I wished for flower gardens
and so, after much time,
he built them
With much labor
With two by fours
in the perfect octagonal shape
Their edges sharp and true
And then,
to his horror
my flowers bloomed wild and rich
Tumbling over the edges
in a beautiful display of
disobediance

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-26 09:18 PM

This is adorable. This reminds me of the afternoon my daughter spent barking under my grape vines. They looked so nice. But oh, the next time she saw them. Joyce

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2001-04-27 04:56 PM

I do love a display of disobedient flowers! *S* Enjoyed this!

Tessa
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 67
Ohio

3 posted 2001-04-27 07:06 PM

Thank you Joyce and Suthern!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-04-28 12:59 PM

Tessa~
Absolutely delightful !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-01 03:57 PM

and I, wish the same thing, more time and more soil...I love flowers

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

6 posted 2001-05-01 11:40 PM

Don't you love it when something as fragile as a flower has the strength to disobey? Strong message here! Well done.

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