Open Poetry #13 |
Inside My Mind |
PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
They can see Without really seeing They can exist Without really being What would they do If confronted by you? Something only time could measure No gold nor jewels in this treasure And when I’m alone Inside my mind, Nothing transpires, nothing hurts Inside my mind A place to go Without ever leaving A faith somehow Without even believing My body wrecked and shattered But none of this matters There’s a garden where I go In which the seeds of life grow And when I’m alone Inside my mind, Nothing transpires, nothing hurts Inside my mind |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
In your temple ... well done. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Something only time could measure No gold nor jewels in this treasure ===================== A faith somehow Without even believing My body wrecked and shattered But none of this matters There’s a garden where I go In which the seeds of life grow And when I’m alone Inside my mind, Nothing transpires, nothing hurts Inside my mind ====================== cant think of any place Id rather visit *S* "A faith somehow Without even believing" what a very cool line that is... this whole poem is very cool ... mind over matter ... when one knows how to be in touch with themselves like this... the possibilites are endless... from self healing to finding inner peace Self sanctuary.... way cool. Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"And when I’m alone Inside my mind, Nothing transpires, nothing hurts" It's where we can be free....I relate..... |
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