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The Other Natural
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The Other Natural |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
The Other Natural No ticket-taker could mistake The telling way her hard heels clicked against the concrete As she passed through the gate And disappeared beneath the stands. Nor could the tunnel's long, dark length Prevent their minds a city lurk With knowing how her light, quick step So must have pushed her wholesome shape Against her simple, cotton print. But when her silhouette emerged Into that light we call a field Precisely as a roar went up As though the hand of God had turned Some giant dial, The volume overwhelmed their words. RMW |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
An excellent detailed portrait of a moment, Bob. Core |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
Poetry story masterpiece. WOW!!!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The imagery of this even cast the tunnel's shadows... excellent! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Imagery epitomized!!!  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Imagery epitomized!!! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Corinne, Amuse, Sunshine....Thank you all. Virginia...Laughing....is that "THE WAVE"...those little guys are doing? Bob |
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