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love don't love me!!!
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love don't love me!!! |
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bcm New Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 6 |
I still don't know the reason, after all this time. But, it comes 2 no surprise. It seems when I go left, love goes right. Something happens when, I give love a chance. I want 2 move with u, but something holds u back. I feel the rhythm, but I just don't know the dance. All I ever need, I can never find. All I ever wanted was, 2 get it right. What's wrong with me? I wasn't sure but now believe, love don't love me. I know what's missing in my life, Something 4 sure, and something pure. So I pray because, I'm so afraid. I'm always gonna feel this way. All I want, is some happiness. Take it 2 a level that's above the rest. I want 2 know, How its suppose 2 be. I want 2 feel something real. but now I believe, Love don't love me. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've read this several times, and while I can relate to the apparent poor timing of love , I must admit I am confused at the use of numerals and the abbreviated "u"--was there something I missed? And don't mind me, I get confused alot!  Thanks for the read. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
cool piece! |
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bcm New Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 6 |
in this piece...i used # n place of the words...and "u" in place of you...that's the way i write my poems... |
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