Open Poetry #13 |
. . . Explore me anew . . . |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I speak You listen But you don’t hear me. We kiss Absently Where has the warmth gone? We hug Silently The tingle is gone. In bed Making love? How can this be love? I need Attention Like when we first met. I need You to care Enough to hear me. I want Wet kisses Exploring my lips. I love Tender hugs Increasing desire. I crave Lovemaking Adventurously. Take me Anytime Almost anywhere. Need me. Desire me. Explore me anew. Again And again And then, once again! And I Will always Reciprocate, love. Then we Will always Share love, forever! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Very poignant and timely piece. Well done. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
PK ~ Thanks for the read and gr8 comment. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
*sigh* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, please this is wonderful Interloper you have a beautiful talent |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ Thank you for the kind words. You always seem to enjoy my poor offerings. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
such warm passion in your poem. We all yearn to be touched and caressed - some can do it by physical touch, others with words. Those are the rare ones. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Reciprocate..such a nice word *s ~Wynter..I enjoyed reading you tonight I had to look up your names meaning ( the curiosity in me) ...why choose that ...I don't see you that way... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I thought this was filled with such passion and I enjoyed reading your work......Sue Suetang |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BrightStar ~ Thanks for the nice sigh I didn't mean to miss you. Latin Passion ~ Thank you for your extraordinary compliment Wynter ~ How sweet you are. Sometimes I feel like my work is kind of an intrusion. When I first started here at Passions I felt like an intruder among so many good poets. Suetang ~ I think your first comment on my work. Thank you for reading Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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