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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-04-26 05:35 PM



I started talking
well, I blurted
over the phone
trying to sound happy
to keep things happy
I need things happy
but then with the pulls
on me
of me
I can only do so much
for so many
and then....
there is nothing
left for me
so I blurted
that I needed
that I was unhappy
                  (while trying to smile)
I cried
not meaning to
but when you need to please
sometimes you forget
sometimes they forget
that sometimes
you need to be pleased
made to feel special
he called me back
just a bit ago
asked for some time with me
tonight
he has to work late
he'll be tired
but he asked
for time with me
......he heard me.....
~SEA~


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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-26 05:38 PM


Halleleuah!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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2 posted 2001-04-26 05:40 PM


that makes him one very smart (and lucky) man, SEA  
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state of mind
3 posted 2001-04-26 06:58 PM


amazing just what a little time spent will do.

Bernie



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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4 posted 2001-04-26 07:06 PM


Sometimes we try to be everything for everybody and wait too long before we say enough.  Glad that you finally let him know you just needed him to be with you. My husband says he can't read my mind, to tell him when I need him to hold me up.
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5 posted 2001-04-26 07:54 PM


Big smiles here SEA...so happy for you.  
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2001-04-27 12:34 PM


never worked for me..well how could it..I think I received  a total of ten phone calls in 30 years...

~Wynter...

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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7 posted 2001-04-27 10:35 AM


How could he not SEA? How could he not? Good to hear you are being heard, even though I suspect you were always being heard, somehow.
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8 posted 2001-04-27 10:40 AM


It is always good when they hear Sea, you wrote of it well.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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