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The Kiss
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The Kiss |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The sun begins to rise Warmth will soon arrive, To burn away the mist, You give me just a kiss, Sentimental I will sigh, No more will we now talk I watch as you just walk, In to your fresh spring day, No words you go away, Incidentally I know why. You must remember this, A kiss isn’t just a kiss, Fundamentals don’t apply; When it’s a kiss good-bye. Gloom |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Professor....like your poem....but must dispute your conclusion. "Fundamentals" ALWAYS apply. Thanks for sharing. Bob |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Those goodbye kisses can be hard...James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I like this piece...it tells the truth....a brilliant write!! Nathan |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Nicely done, Professor! Krawdad |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A kiss goodby can be sad. But sometimes it gives a promise of a return. Joyce |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, RMW, Things like these are always under dispute And reevaluations. Thank you, James Even the softest things can be hard. Thank you, Nate Dogg, Perhaps, more of a view, I am pleased you liked it. Thank you, Krawdad, Thank you, Joyce, I like to think there are always possibilities Gloom |
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