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Open Poetry #13

The Kiss

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-04-25 02:32 PM

The sun begins to rise
Warmth will soon arrive,
To burn away the mist,
You give me just a kiss,
Sentimental I will sigh,

No more will we now talk
I watch as you just walk,
In to your fresh spring day,
No words you go away,
Incidentally I know why.

You must remember this,
A kiss isn’t just a kiss,
Fundamentals don’t apply;
When it’s a kiss good-bye.

Gloom

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-04-25 03:20 PM

Professor....like your poem....but must dispute your conclusion. "Fundamentals" ALWAYS apply. Thanks for sharing. Bob

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-04-25 05:40 PM

Those goodbye kisses can be hard...James

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2001-04-26 12:43 PM

I like this piece...it tells the truth....a brilliant write!!

Nathan

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-04-26 12:50 PM

Nicely done, Professor!

Krawdad
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Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2001-04-26 01:25 AM

A kiss goodby can be sad. But sometimes it gives a promise of a return. Joyce

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2001-04-26 05:44 AM

Thank you, RMW,
Things like these are always under dispute
And reevaluations.

Thank you, James
Even the softest things can be hard.

Thank you, Nate Dogg,
Perhaps, more of a view,
I am pleased you liked it.

Thank you, Krawdad,

Thank you, Joyce,
I like to think there are always possibilities

Gloom

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