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Dennis
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0 posted 2001-04-25 10:07 PM


Our date

take my hand, we have only this time
dress casual or formal, you always outshine
the others, dear, you are my flower
I'll fill the night within my power….

Dance with me?  Come on, let's trip
the light fantastic, soul, blues, that's it!
One rose for you? Oh, no, I think not
you deserve tons and bows in a knot.

I promised a loved one I would write again
to make her smile, myself to win?
I'm just a man, honest and true
I'm just a man, in love with you.

Who are you?   I'm so sorry, for we have
not been introduced, I'm acting suave
I'm closing now, the date is ours
meet me at 8 it's our special hour.

Let me fill  your evening just once
come on, I have it, I have a hunch
you and me, dancing till dawn
come along, let me try, just one chance,
or I'm ….gone. :


[This message has been edited by Dennis (edited 04-25-2001).]

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kaile
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1 posted 2001-04-25 10:10 PM


what a teaser!!  
I bet all the females will be surging towards you after reading the last line

[This message has been edited by faterider (edited 04-25-2001).]

1slick_lady
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2 posted 2001-04-29 01:17 PM


dennis....this date sounds like such a sweet time...helen

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


latin passion
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3 posted 2001-04-29 01:31 PM


smooth, but are we playing with fire. The person I seek, knows my signature.LP
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-04-29 01:48 PM


Ah Dennis ... a lovely riddle of love, very nicely written!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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