Open Poetry #13 |
Free to Go |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Free to Go Maybe I made a mistake to let you go because I seem too sad without you. Yet I probably couldn't have stopped you anyway. Still if I am sad while you are away and you are happy to be away it doesn't seem fair to ask you to come back for no other reason then to insure my happiness. And how could I find happiness while having a sad women in my presence and believing that I was somehow responsible for her sad countenance. So as I thought of your need for happiness it gave me the strength to not beg you to stay. Still never hesitate to call me if you even need me in anyway. You are free to go. Jameslee@April21,2001 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, you are the winner. Well done. |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
A very nice flow to this, a difficult but important part of love. Nicely done! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I've said it before, and I mean it just the same now......you have the biggest heart.....wonderful, you are wonderful! SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is when it hurts the most. . . but is the right thing to do. . . now, move on. . . well done James. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Wow JamesMichael, not wanting to her to go, but letting your feelings let her go, so that she will be happy with what she decided. Then the control of your permission with the last line. "You are free to go" Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I had a wonderful talk with her today about this subject...friend to friend...enjoyed the opportunity to discuss my feelings with her...James |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful feeling James , Love is often one of the hardest things to work out, you in this piece have shown you are closer to knowing what it means to really love someone selflessly |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
"If you love someone set them free" Beautiful. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I'll keep you in my prayers, I hope she reads and sees your plea -- for the offering is given unconditionally. LP |
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