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Sunbeams Going Down
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Sunbeams Going Down |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sunbeams Going Down Virginia Salter fresh air gentle breeze sunbeams going down crimson sky cotton-candy clouds an end-of-day crown heavier the air does grow as dampness touches skin more slowly do my footsteps go as slumber reaches in luring me pulling me with a power strong and sure lulling me to a peace of mind convincing I’m secure ©April 18, 2000 |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Mesmerizing. Joyce |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
I really like this poem. "luring me to a peace of mind convincing I’m secure" If this is how you really feel you must sleep like a baby =) Great poem! *JOE* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Virginia...how did you know? Excellent! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Zzzzzzzzzzzz |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What a peaceful read this was..... yes, I enjoy watching the sunbeams going down, and the moonbeams coming up...  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all, and Krawdad, you made me laught out loud, I hope I didn't wake you.  |
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