Open Poetry #13 |
Taurus - El Toro |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tough as a nail, with hearts as big as a whale Artists always on call, loyal, dependable to all Undivided in trust, they show wisdom are just Reliant and true blue but self indulgent too Unequivocally has power to live for the hour Stubborn in sorrow this bull named El Toro Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Bravo! Poetically clever. Melton |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very witty, Kethry...a fantastic write! Nathan |
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Doug Pretorius Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 81Ontario, Canada |
Woohoo! I totally agree with the other comments, very clever and well written! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks, It's part of a series I'm working on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent description, Kethry... it makes me remember and very much miss an old friend who was all those things. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, Interesting and well done. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hey you... nice to see your name here again girlie and glad to see your continuing your acrostic series way cool.... and psssst..... (congrats on breaking 4000!!) Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How clever ... is that a double acrostic? Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Such a brilliant little piece ! Wonderful ! Congrats on the 4000 milestone, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, congratulations on 4000 and you are subtle aren't you!! Welcome back, Kethry! Kathleen Blake |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Keth? HOW DID YOU DO THIS?????? Please Help! I've done a triple acrostic and could never get it to line up!!! Very Clever, you! Congrats on 4,000! |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Exemplary piece of the acrostic style, Kethry. Thanks. Btw, I'm not just "full of bull" for no reason. "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks everyone. I can't tell you how much I've appreciated the ongoing support and encouragement over the last nine months. Lynne Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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