Open Poetry #13 |
Hanging |
ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
The day I saw you, I felt this connection that couldn't be explained. Are you feeling it too? Are you afraid like I am to give in to the desire that lies between us? I don't know if I should tell you how I feel........somehow I know you know though The way you stared at me one day from across the table, made my heart want to soar Or the way that we always laugh and joke.....or the day you called me "baby" If there is something between us please tell me. Don't leave me hanging |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
uh oh you've left me hanging...nice write yuh |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
don't you hate that Laura??? hope that you get your answer soon. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
An emotion well expressed. I say go with your instincts! Women definitely have them. "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Nothing is worse than not knowing, boy I know that. Kathleen Blake |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Hey kiddo---Catching you late tonight. Nice concept in this. But yeah, hanging is a real uncertain place to be. Nice write. Hang in there. Today could change everything. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Ok, had to read this a few times. I like this, Nice write. Don't think about telling your feelings. Don't hold back tell how you feel always. hoping you become un-hung soon. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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