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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-03-28 10:15 AM



The day I saw you, I felt this connection that couldn't be explained.
Are you feeling it too?  Are you afraid like I am to give in to the desire that lies between us?
I don't know if I should tell you how I feel........somehow I know you know though
The way you stared at me one day from across the table, made my heart want to soar
Or the way that we always laugh and joke.....or the day you called me "baby"
If there is something between us please tell me.
Don't leave me hanging

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-03-28 10:17 AM


uh oh you've left me hanging...nice write yuh
Sven
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2 posted 2001-03-28 12:53 PM


don't you hate that Laura???

hope that you get your answer soon. . .  

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Just A Woman
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3 posted 2001-03-28 02:08 PM


An emotion well expressed.  

I say go with your instincts!  Women definitely have them.  

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

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4 posted 2001-03-28 02:27 PM


enjoy
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5 posted 2001-03-28 04:33 PM


Nothing is worse than not knowing, boy I know that.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


JLR
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6 posted 2001-03-29 12:45 PM


Hey kiddo---Catching you late tonight.  Nice concept in this.  But yeah, hanging is a real uncertain place to be.  Nice write.  Hang in there.  Today could change everything.
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7 posted 2001-04-27 06:02 AM


Ok, had to read this a few times.
I like this, Nice write.  Don't think about telling your feelings.  Don't hold back tell how you feel always.  
hoping you become un-hung soon.

Bernie



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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