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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
losing it so vivid it was, but as my sleep-conscious mind went to grasp at the thought share, share it so profound, touch lives it disappeared but the feeling still haunts me it must have been very profound, indeed write with grace, all others lose face; |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
dont ya hate when that happends.... or a really good thought or verse comes to ya at a bad time... like in the shower.... cuz if I dont write it down RIGHT then.. I do lose it.... bought a recorder for the car... so I dont wreck--writing while driving...LOL need another one for the shower  very cool poem Lady.... even when when ya write about forgetting what you wanted to write... its profound  Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady I can't tell you how many times that has happened to me, especially in the car I've been known to scribble whilst driving.....lol. Thanks for this one. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
When I do that it is called "old-timer's" disease. In your case it is just plain, good poetry. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
very profound - when I remember - THEN I know I've the most profound - but always wonder about the 'thought' that 'got away' |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
if only our minds could be put into "record" mode. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lady In White - it must have been very profound, indeed This seven words have touched me immensley, and I have yet to know why. Very strong writing. BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This unfortunately I relate to big time, and I just hate it when this happens, I call them "senior hiccups". Great jobber! Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You're not alone with this dear friend. Good poem. Joyce |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
A great write from a lost thought...profound! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Oh ... been there. I think there is no capture for those that slip away~ They are just meant to dwell in someone else's pen~ Wonderfully done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
you know where this happens to me? in the shower... i think all my good stuff in the shower... now i keep a note book and pen by the towel. You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Hello, I'm back, found myself....[soft laugh]...thank you all for reading.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Obviously, you're not alone! LOL. And those lost profound thoughts always seem to haunt us, teasing us with how GOOD they were, too... our best ever! LOL. Well done! |
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