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Silent, Motioned, Pictured (A Proposal)
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Silent, Motioned, Pictured (A Proposal) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Look inside old holly’s wood These eyes they silver screen me Remember back when you could Tell not from voice you’d seen me All the carpet’s red with blood Flashbulbs burst and then fade out Wade against the coming flood Silence heaves a mournful shout In the boudoir pat my face With the stars of glitter shine All I need is time and pace Punch will surely guide my lines Five minutes to a curtain call That will last forever on Wish I could for certain stall Need my acting skills be gone? Light shines glitter woods tonight The shadows lick out the flames And more motion pictures write The words of two lover’s names [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 04-25-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is very good...it would be a great one to read aloud! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Walt, you have a gr8 imagination and are very creative. but, then, I think I've already said that. Write on! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
W.O.W. certainly suits you---what a romantic look at the old glamour of the silver screen. This is fantastic walt! Hugs to you, love the way your mind works!  |
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