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Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

0 posted 2001-04-22 05:54 PM

I tripped and fell in a field of wild flowers
You laughed and teased, calling my name
A boy and a girl playing freely for hours
Would we one day return here again?

A simple ring of dandelion stems
I gave to you with this innocent vow
"To the best of hearts and the best of friends
Comes lasting love, starting from now"

Years past, so fast we grew into towers
So straight and tall and rigid it seems
And days of play in fields of wild flowers
Disappeared and replaced with material things

Yet that vow came back in a dream to haunt me
One night as I slept curled up next to you
I awoke and prayed that you would still want me
To take you back to where dreams come true

In the car we went for a few short hours
It took all my strength to hide the surprise
To the field to play in the field of wild flowers
Our vow was renewed with tears in our eyes

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-04-22 07:05 PM

PackRatMike~
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww !
What a wonderfully sweet piece.
Someone's heart is showing .... I like !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-04-22 07:19 PM

I'm listening to nature music to relax, and I just loved this one, Mike, thank you!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

3 posted 2001-04-22 08:00 PM

This is beautiful, Mike! She is one lucky woman, that's for sure!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

4 posted 2001-04-22 08:09 PM

What a beautiful way to express love!

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

5 posted 2001-04-22 11:39 PM

Marge, Rose, snowpants and Elizabeth....thank you all for the nice comments. I'm glad you liked it.

Mike

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2001-04-26 12:06 PM

Oh Im so glad I get the chance to send this one back to the top...your love shows in every petal here darlin

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

7 posted 2001-04-26 12:13 PM

Why thank you Paula. I'm glad you liked this one.

Mike

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-04-26 01:36 PM

Well done, Mike. Well done, indeed!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

9 posted 2001-04-26 01:49 PM

Thank you Interloper.

Mike

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-04-26 02:23 PM

this is so perfect....loved this

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

11 posted 2001-04-26 03:54 PM

Thank you SEA.

Mike

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