Open Poetry #13 |
Dramarama |
PoeticaL Member
since 2001-03-31
Posts 50 |
Silence invaded our Friendship? Love? Lust? Infatuation? No wonder I’m lost And damn there’s no cliff notes to explain what it once was Now that silence made death of without even a complete because I only feel I’ve found The meaning of oblivion Maybe we rode to the last Scene of our movie You know The smoke filled fade Maybe the last scene Of every drama Comes despite us And now…the sad song Playing the uninterested credits rolling And who takes credit exactly For the last line Do they take it Prior to the last text Or does someone write Another movie to do that? I never thought about it Before But a sequel Yes.. Perhaps A sequel to us Another coming together A mending of sorts A tale told twice The best could be Yet to come But wait…damn! Yes wait Don’t we all know The theater of pain Can’t be revisited With a happy Ending line With all things Turning into A melancholy time Well not.. Yes not…. If you’ve killed The main character In the first motion Of the picture that Never was "I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith" |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is an excellent use of words, so, Sir, to the top! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Life is like a bad soap sometimes or even like a movie but dang it no popcorn! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
PoeticaL, I could see the scenes flashing before me. Well done, well written. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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