I Cant Find The Strength to Tell Her

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juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-04-22 06:09 PM

I fall for the loveliest dream
her voice is such goddest screams
calling upon me
to calm her mouth
with the loveliest kiss
she ever felt
but would that tell her my love?
i look upon the stars
and hear ur voice
wispered through the wind
i look upon the moon
and wonder if that is u calling me
cause u feel this love in u
was i reborn?
was i given a new chance
to live this life?
or did i come back
just to find u again?
cause with out u i cant find
no resting place
or la paz de tenerte en mi corazon
let me know u better
to love u
and show that my love is pure
full of happiness, tenderness
so u know not all of us are the same
let me love ur name
let get close to u
just let me love u all

Amuse_mi
Member

since 2001-04-22

Posts 110

1 posted 2001-04-22 06:15 PM

Such passion. You need to tell her, if you haven't. She will melt. It is a beatiful thing.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-04-23 01:48 PM

Very passionate and heartfelt out pouring of love.

"I am not now that which I have been."

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

3 posted 2001-04-23 01:58 PM

thanks .......to everyone that read my poem .........i enjoy writing them as much as i enjoy it ....when i read ur coments ..thanx ..........thankfully urs J>P

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

4 posted 2001-04-23 02:17 PM

I felt the true love you have for her too juandodriguez...nicely written

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-04-23 02:35 PM

Beautiful,romantic,and I got the Spanish line too. Lovely!

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

6 posted 2001-04-23 02:46 PM

thanx people u been so kind ...i apreciate ur ...coments ,,,,,,

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-04-23 03:50 PM

I enjoyed reading your poem...
suggest that u use you in place of u...
if you like...James

Sami
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2001-04-24 05:24 PM

"her voice is such goddest screams
calling upon me
to calm her mouth
with the loveliest kiss
she ever felt
but would that tell her my love?"

Juan, this is so beautiful...she is really lucky to have you say such things about her....
~Sami~

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

9 posted 2001-04-24 06:20 PM

yeah but shell be more surpriced to know its ment to her ....bc she is read all this poems

Sami
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-04-25 10:13 AM

and i loved every single one of them ;-)
~Sami~

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

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