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It's Your Fault
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It's Your Fault |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 it is surely because of you that I don’t get much sleep these days... it is due to your warm embraces that I cannot sit still... you’ve stared at me with the sweetest gaze... my every wish you’ve promised to fulfill... I am inundated with the joy you’ve provided... my heart is full of the smiles in your eyes... the miracle of your presence has left me tongue-tied... in you, my loneliness has finally met its demise... each morning I awake to the sound of your heart beating... though the miles endure in spite of my protest... I impatiently await the day when we will again be meeting... for it’s only in you that I find my soul’s complete rest. -kh 04/24/01 to be with you... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
So wonderful when find our other half. Joyce |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This poem makes me smile...good for you to find this happiness...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful write, SP...nice to have those kind of feelings, isn't it? jwesley |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
snowpants - your inner feelings have shone through in this writing. Well done. BC |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
snowpants- romantic indeed! |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
And that is how love should be. Beautifully done! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Snowpants, very romantically beautiful writing here.....oh yeah....*s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Joyce: yes, indeed, it is! thanks!  JamesMichael: I am glad I could give you a smile! thank you for your kind reply! jwesley: it really is wonderful! thank you so much! Bill: thank you! I appreciate your reply and I am glad you enjoyed! walker: thanks! glad you could stop by! Tessa: oh yes...wouldn't have it any other way!! thanks so much! GS: thank you so much! glad you liked it!  sp to be with you... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am inundated with the joy you’ve provided... my heart is full of the smiles in your eyes... the miracle of your presence has left me tongue-tied... in you, my loneliness has finally met its demise... ============== Aint love grand  way cool SP.. youre making rhyme your own... "teach" says very well done and great cadence... and he says now he wants you to mix your rhyme skills with your gift of imagery and go for it :goofy face: I say hes a bossy teacher and ya should cut class LOL ... beautiful poem of anticpation and devotion K. Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
*sigh* Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
JM: grand 'tis! indeed it is!  thank you so much, m'friend for your reply...as for that Teach...ain't he EVER satisfied???  Just kiddin'...I truly appreciate the 'assignments.' Otherwise, I wouldn't have gotten my butt in gear and tried any of these new things...but, yes, he is one bossy Teach, and I say I'm entitled to cut class! Alright!!  interloper: sigh, huh? why thank you...that is quite a compliment! glad you liked! sp to be with you... |
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