The day I thought for the first time

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Open Poetry #13

The day I thought for the first time

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2001-04-25 05:24 PM

Sitting in my mind
drinking day old coffe
from cracked mugs

Pondering life's meaning
and comming up empty

I see a light
and run to it
only to find it burnt out

I see you across the table
and smile
and ask the time
though telepathically
we have made love
a thousand times

Tired I close my eyes
and dream of dancing sheep
and some jazz music
in the backround

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-25 05:31 PM

Some day, huh?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-04-25 05:37 PM

Interesting Brad...James

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-25 05:38 PM

yes it is the same day. lol thanks

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

4 posted 2001-04-25 07:29 PM

"Pondering life's meaning
and comming up empty"

So true... so terribly true.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-04-25 08:11 PM

I really like your style of writing here...the feeling of this is of a daydream.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2001-04-25 08:30 PM

A cup of good coffee will do this. Joyce

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