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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-04-24 08:41 AM


Not a Quiver
Virginia Salter

dampness of the morning
lingers from night’s rain
stillness overwhelms
in a place where wind is more the norm
ah, bird flits black wings
across gray sky
giving slight semblance of life
to landscape-oil-painted scene

not even a quiver
to tulips
not a blade of grass stirs
from worm nor moth
nothing scurries in lack of warm light
lilac trees motionless between deciduous, evergreen shrubs
bringing pale contrast to green of spring

trees that had been mere naked silhouettes
just days ago, leafy green
blocking sky’s view
in greater magnitude
all still
fixed
immobile

blackbird gone
the only hints of activity
come within my abode
as fingers punch out messages
ethereally,
feline pussyfoots
one-room into another, magically
jet’s rumble, reverbs sound waves
into submission

©April 15, 2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-04-25 01:16 AM


This is very nice.  The sound of spring.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-25 01:27 AM


V,
Nicely painted!  Much better than a photo.  Like the line..."feline pussyfoots one-room into another."

Krawdad
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-04-26 12:22 PM


Your message is not so intangible ... well done is more like it.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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