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Open Poetry #13

I Dream of Better Days

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-04-23 08:19 PM

I DREAM OF BETTER DAYS

when i dream of better days
i dream to be with u
the one that makes me smile
in my rough and cold days
the one that makes me feel
secure in my troublesome days
i wish u could know its u i want
its u i need close to my heart
its u my heart desires
but when would i be able to tell u
when its too late?
when she is with another man?
or is too late to tell now >?
some dream of better days
as mine is to love for ever
my dream is to hold u tight
and never let u go
never let u cry
till the day i die
her name is shown in this verse
and she'll only see it
and if she don't
then i'll say this
so then bee it
at least i didnt told her
to feel her harsh rejection
a thug neva cries
but sometimes a tear
can free ur soul

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-04-23 11:34 PM

Juan...."...a tear can free our soul..." Excellent! Bob

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2001-04-24 11:20 AM

enjoy

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

3 posted 2001-04-24 01:28 PM

thanx for ur coments ...and for reading my poem ....it means a lot to me

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