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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 2001-04-23 04:38 PM


Is this world worth saving?
Everywhere I see,
Such evil deeds,
Could this world be worth saving?

If there was but a sign
Or at least one person praying,
Would it be enough
To make this world worth saving?
In darkness all I see
Skeletons in the wind waving,
Bones clicking together
A chiming they are making
Violence is our business, and business is good
But yet a world not worth saving?
How many people needed
Holding hands praying,
Would it stop the hurting of
Those in this world worth saving?

Madness, insanity
Everywhere I look I see
Evil in totality
Even if we all knelt praying,
Could this world ever be
Worth saving?


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1 posted 2001-04-23 04:40 PM


PK~ I have to hope so....for my kids and everyone else's......   SEA
PoeticKnight
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2 posted 2001-04-23 04:45 PM


This is actually a positive and hopeful, yet angry piece, thanks.
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3 posted 2001-04-23 04:52 PM


....it felt angry and hopeful......
Nate Dogg
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4 posted 2001-04-23 11:05 PM


A very nice, thought-provoking piece...I really enjoyed this....thanks for sharing!

Nathan

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