Piyar ki rah (Way of love)

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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

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Pakistan

0 posted 2001-04-23 04:34 PM

Kisi koo appni ankhoon maen samana chahta hoon
(I want to be absorbed 'to be included' some one in my eyes)
Kisi kay dil main apna ghar banana chahta hoon
(I want to build my sweet home in some once's heart)

Jo koi bhee karay ga ham say muhabat kabhi
(Any one who do love to me ever)
Usay apnay dil main basana chahta hoon
(I want to settle it (he/she) in my heart)

Oor jo koe karta hai ham say nafrat aghar
(And if some one disjusts 'dislikes' me)
Usay piyar ki rah pay lana chahta hoon
(I want to take it (he/she) on the way of LOVE)

Kisi kay dil main muhabat ka dia jala kar
(While to inflame a candle of love in any onces heart)
Parwana us shama ka bun jana chahta hoon
(I want to be a moth of that candle)

Apni zindagi ka hamsafar bana kar kissi ko
(While to make any ones my life partner)
Dil kay aynay main usay sajana chahta hoon
(I Want to decorate her in my hearts' mirror)

Us ki sansoon ki kushboo bun kar Wasi
(While becoming the smell of her sighs Wasi)
Zindagi bhar ka saath nibhana chahta hoon
(I want to live with her throughout my life)

~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

SEA

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1 posted 2001-04-23 04:38 PM

Wasi~ this is really beautiful!

I enjoyed this

SEA

helen smith
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since 2001-03-12

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2 posted 2001-04-23 05:44 PM

if I were a moth I would flutter around the flame of the candle of your heart Waseem ..nice

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

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Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-04-23 07:09 PM

Lovely to read in another language, for poetry has no boundaries, and know it from such a gentle heart. I know it is difficult to translate into English for us, and I thank you for doing just that. ~Shalom

"I am not now that which I have been."

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

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Washington State

4 posted 2001-04-23 07:19 PM

I love your language and the way you interpret into ours. Great work. You had one line "While becoming the smell of her sighs" That delighted me. Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 04-23-2001).]

Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

5 posted 2001-04-24 06:22 AM

Thank you very much to you all for this act of kindness and appriciation. I am so much happy to read all this.

I promise to you all for sharing all my URDU poems with translation for you people so that u taste the rythem of Urdu poetry as well.
So nice of you.......Thanx

helen smith
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since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

6 posted 2001-05-05 04:08 PM

Wassssssemm The more I read it ... the nicer it becomes .It truly is beautiful

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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7 posted 2001-05-05 04:42 PM

Very interesting...enjoyed your poem Wasi...nice to sound it out...James

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8 posted 2001-05-05 11:36 PM

Thank you, wasi...this is a real treat!

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

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9 posted 2001-05-05 11:46 PM

I love it when you write these! Enjoyed.

Marge Tindal

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10 posted 2001-05-06 01:24 PM

Waseem~
This is just beautiful.

'Kisi kay dil main muhabat ka dia jala kar
(While to inflame a candle of love in any onces heart)
Parwana us shama ka bun jana chahta hoon
(I want to be a moth of that candle)'

Thank you so much for sharing.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

11 posted 2001-05-06 04:03 PM

Thank you very much to all of you again . I am very much happy to read all your comments...thanx

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