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SEA
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0 posted 2001-04-23 04:31 PM



Come dive into my waters
come swim within my sea
let my tide gently pull you
deeper into me

Come tip toe through my waves
please your soul in my warm sands
come feel the rhythmic tug
take away life's unfair demands

Come sail away serenely
let your heart be free
let go and give in
to the calling of the sea

I'm right here waiting
with tranquil beaches to delight
romance is guaranteed
every single night


~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Waseem Cheema
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1 posted 2001-04-23 04:41 PM


Ok..........I am present here and coming..Lolo  

I love to nice poetry.

PoeticKnight
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2 posted 2001-04-23 04:42 PM


This is a very very good one, I love the poetry here.
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3 posted 2001-04-23 04:43 PM


thank you Wasi  
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4 posted 2001-04-23 04:43 PM


PK~   thank you
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5 posted 2001-04-24 07:17 PM


So sweet and gentle. I hope this comes to you soon!  
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6 posted 2001-04-24 08:25 PM


SEA - I'm coming to the west coast soon. I'll meet you on the bridge that crosses the stream, that flows through the valley, in Glockamora. In the mist of the early morning.

BC

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7 posted 2001-04-24 11:11 PM


won't you let me take you on a SEA cruise...?

Oh, SEA! This is great....can I build a sand castle on your beach?  

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8 posted 2001-04-25 12:43 PM


Thank you Brad  

BC~ that was a beautiful reply,   thank you

Balladeer~ ummm, that would be a yes!  

~SEA

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9 posted 2001-04-25 10:10 AM


I love the sea, and this as well....

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10 posted 2001-04-25 11:01 AM


Well, SEA, I guess I'm just about the cleanest guy around. I AM going to have to buy more towels or a bigger washing machine

You are getting very good at this.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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11 posted 2001-04-25 11:03 AM


What a delightful imagination you have...
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12 posted 2001-04-26 11:01 AM


I have tried to pen a response but the paper keeps burning up, the ink dries in the heat, and when I try to put it on the PC it melts.  S-o-o-o-o-o-o you will just have to imagine my poetic reply

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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13 posted 2001-04-26 11:26 AM


I'd love to visit your tide pool, be drowned in your undertow and taste your the fruit of the sea.  

Loved this one... hmmmmm too much.  

Parker

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14 posted 2001-04-26 11:57 AM


if it were in my power - i'd take up that garuntee  - Lovely
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15 posted 2001-04-26 04:51 PM


just can't seem to find my swimsuit, where did i put it,  oh yea next to that sailboat, that i don't have..lol

Nice write Sea

Bernie





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Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-26-2001).]

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