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| Open Poetry #13 |
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Moth To Flame..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I would touch you if I could your heat so inviting drawing me to you a need I can't describe an almost uncontrolable urge to feel the heat you radiate so deliciously yet, to dance within your fire would bring certain death destruction to my soul but oh.......... what a lovely way to burn ~SEA~ |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Sea, Yes, that is a lovely way to burn.......i enjoyed this very much.  |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Burn the house down, SEA. LOL |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Please don't singe your wings, dear Sea. Joyce |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
I would touch you if I could............Yes u can I love to nice poetry. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
dancing with the flame?? ah, but the burns can sometimes never be healed. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
take it from the queen Luna baby... being a moth aint easy... i got the singed eye lashes to prove it... Ya see... the problem is... each time we fly thru that pretty blue flame... the next time... we NEED it hotter..... and so on and so on... but we moths... we learn all our lessons the hard way ... at some point... we either crash and burn ... or learn the secret.... become the flame ...  Better yet....aspire to be a butterfly   and YOU KNOW I ~felt~ this one Sea-girlie I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
SEA....nicely phrased. Bob Janet Marie...very astute. Bob |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea: After the flame, what is left? Great writing! |
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NIAI Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 52 |
You have TOUCHED - and I am better for it. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
such longing and desire....indeed it would be a lovely way to burn....  be well...Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Very pretty poem. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
and so too would I be consumed - - well done SEA |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
Pssst... SEA, what a treat for me to read this poem you've shared with us today... Hugs2uDearPoetFriend ~coco~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yep, burn baby burn..........what a way to go!! well done Sea On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
please come dance with me you will not burn by my touch we can fan the flames polishing buckles friction causes heat to rise we have combustion Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ParisGrl~ thank you PK~ the heat from the fire.....never dies Joyce~ I'm trying not to! Wasi~ Sven~no, there are some burns that never can heal..... Janet~ I do aspire to be a butterfly....someday I'll learn to fly.... RMW~ thank you Martie~ after the flame, I have no idea....the flame is most inticing.... NIAI~that is wonderful, thank you! Greeneyes~ thank you BrightStar~ thanks WY~ thank you Coco~ SO happy to see you again! What's up, you dropped the Baci....why? GS~ thank you Interloper~ so lovely..... ~SEA If I let you into my heart..... |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
If it feels good, then it is good. *S* |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PK~ you could never know how hot that flame is..... |
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