My Daughter ( The Light of my Dark Soul)

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Open Poetry #13

My Daughter ( The Light of my Dark Soul)

juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-04-23 01:55 PM

MY DAUGHTER ( THE LIGHT OF MY DARK SOUL)

there is a beauty that was born
when i was told
it filled me with joy
its a boy its a girl
what ever it is
will be a pirl of joy
there are no words to explain my love
but a daughter is an angel sent from heaven
and what a coincidence
her name is Angel
a pure soul with no evil
no pains
no remorse
just a smily face
and tender cry
thas telling me
it is I
ur daughter
ur creation
ur blood
ur light in ur dark soul
I havent seen her
but I feel the closest I can be
she got my eyes
shes got my hear
if she got my temper
well that wont be fare
as I pray I ask the lord
is she the softest side of me
or is she the better side of me
she is all the goodness
I COULD OF BEEN
wich I never could of been
is she the light I couldnt see
she is just a jewell
that shynes all through the night
that makes my reaches REACHER
my spirit feel secure
and my thought all feeled with pureness
she is just my daughter
well that I know for sure
someday she'll call upon me
dady dady please come and play with me
I'll say for sure
but that if ur mama lets me

i love u Angel Ailin

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

1 posted 2001-04-23 02:05 PM

Very tenderly written, I sense words of pride. Congratulations on the birth of your daughter!

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

2 posted 2001-04-23 02:11 PM

awwwwwww so beautiful
your little pearl of joy will have some lovely times hearing your sweet words .... very nice poem

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

3 posted 2001-04-23 02:38 PM

This is very beautiful, I write about my kids too, I should post it sometime. Thanks for sharing!

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

4 posted 2001-04-23 02:41 PM

thanx for ur suport ......just so u know ....my poetry is only my heart talking .....thanx again .....i apreciate it

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