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Open Poetry #13

Let me be . . .

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-23 12:19 PM

Let me be
    Next to thee
    warm, you see
    loving thee

Let me be
    part of thee
    only we
    breathing free

Let me be
one with thee

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2001-04-23 12:42 PM

Simple, yet beautiful!

Tessa
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 67
Ohio

2 posted 2001-04-23 12:42 PM

Beautiful. You capture the closeness of two.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-04-23 02:00 PM

Simply lovely and direct. Invoking feeling that no reader can deny.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

4 posted 2001-04-23 02:02 PM

Let Me Be
One With Thee
Well put, simply said.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-04-23 04:45 PM

beautiful request

SEA

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

6 posted 2001-04-23 05:27 PM

Let me be....too

I love to nice poetry.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-23 07:20 PM

it's a song. . .

one from the heart. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

8 posted 2001-04-23 07:22 PM

Well put. Joyce

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

9 posted 2001-04-24 02:20 PM

Beautiful

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2001-04-24 02:23 PM

Let me be
free
to allow you
to be

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