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Open Poetry #13

I Felt Your Eyes

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2001-04-23 09:08 PM

You tell me you never felt anything for me.
Am I wrong to doubt your sincerity?
I felt your eyes.

The tough guy exterior you portray to view,
I felt myself gravitating to you.
I felt your eyes.

I felt tenderness and kindness I've never known.
Through your eyes, I never felt alone.
I felt your eyes.

Your eyes spoke words, perhaps others never heard.
Did you know I held on to your every word?
I felt your eyes.

For the part of you you couldn't let anyone see.
In your eyes, exposed a vulnerability.
I felt your eyes.

Your eyes on memories path, they heed me.
Right or wrong, vow to follow where they lead me.
And I'm still feeling your eyes.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-23 09:44 PM

And I hope you rad those eyes right. Joyce

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-04-23 10:00 PM

Your eyes spoke words, perhaps others never heard.
Did you know I held on to your every word?
I felt your eyes.

For the part of you you couldn't let anyone see.
In your eyes, exposed a vulnerability.
I felt your eyes.

Your eyes on memories path, they heed me.
Right or wrong, vow to follow where they lead me.
And I'm still feeling your eyes.
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the eyes say so much...
and I love the rhyme scheme here and the repetion line...
very cool poem Gem

"In your eyes, exposed a vulnerability."

ahhh.. that gets me every time

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2001-04-24 11:32 AM

enjoy

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

4 posted 2001-04-24 02:13 PM

JJ-Thank you, I appreciate.
JM-"Hi" and thanks for your thoughts.
Vandana-Thank you.

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