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Open Poetry #13

Flaying the Moment

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-04-23 05:26 AM

Two eyes can see and then cry,
Vision cast,
Emotions rise and then die,
All that you thought and now know,
Visions last,
Realize now is time to go
Looking through watering eyes,
Visions stay,
All that was lingering lies,
Perception destroys the heart,
Visions flay,
Slowly ripping it apart,
Visions flay.

Gloom

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-04-23 12:13 PM

Professor....The repetition of "vision(s)" is interesting, as is "perception destroys the heart". Knowing that light dispels gloom, I can appreciate gloom's aversion to illumination. Interesting. Thanks for sharing. Bob

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