ur lovely voice ( in the weak heart of mine )

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Open Poetry #13

ur lovely voice ( in the weak heart of mine )

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-04-22 12:05 PM

ur lovely voice capture my heart
and ropture through my soul
a hole i cant close
it seems i have heard it b 4
but when?
where ?
is the question
my dreams say in the past
if i have found u at last
why we need to be apart
is it just me that feels this way
or is just this weak heart of mine
should i tell u all this?
should i keep it to my self?
or just forgetting ur voice is the answer
wishing to hear it again I sleep
and hoping to kiss u i dream
is this my stupidity?
or is this weak heart of mine

Sami
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-04-22 04:31 PM

Juan, this is so beautiful....
~Sami~

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

2 posted 2001-04-23 02:02 PM

thanx Sami for ur opinion ...and u will be really surpriced ...who it was dedicated to ......

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

3 posted 2001-04-23 02:40 PM

ohh you say nice stuff ..I have a hole I cannot close

Sami
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-23 05:17 PM

anytime hun..

so are you finally going to tell me who its about???

~Sami~

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

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