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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

0 posted 2001-04-21 11:54 AM

Love the Elusive Flower

Thinking I stand feet firmly planted
My gaze among the stars
Thoughts dipped in sour apple wine
Drunk with why!
Love I have not found
Answers come and go
But I remain steadily perplexed
Seemingly planting miles of desire
But the yield is sparse dwarfed at best
Love the elusive flower
One can only hope for a glimpse
Some have gifted sight and the power
To hold on to that elusiveness
Their paths plainly marked
May-be I should take up traveling?
I could do no worse except to quit searching
My gaze to the stars could it be misleading?
Should I bring my desires closer to earth?
Seeing others reap rewarding fruitage
Only makes me yearn more for
That elusive elixir rarely captured
May-be I have consumed tainted wine!
Giving blurred vision to much power
Passing over gifted fruits of my labor
Sobering the thought of not ever
Finding that elusive flower and
Drink from its sweet nectar

By, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-04-21 12:14 PM

My gaze among the stars
Thoughts dipped in sour apple wine
Drunk with why!
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what a very cool thought...
wonderful poetic ponderings Cerenity...
and as always your gift of imagery laced emotions.
So nice to see your name here.
well done poetess

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

2 posted 2001-04-21 01:36 PM

Yea I hate drinking when I dont feel like it.. but it sure got it's perks too! nyuk nyuk nyuk

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-04-21 04:32 PM

Yes...yes very elusive...our desires want to take us their...seems better to focus on the beauty of friendships...and if love comes along it will be a bonus...James

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-04-21 05:29 PM

"Drunk with why!" very cool.....excellent write

SEA

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-04-21 07:01 PM

elusive yes. . . but once found. . .

wonderful Cerenity. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

6 posted 2001-04-22 10:11 PM

Thank you everyone for your kind replys, been having a bit of a dry muse spell and find im not sure if anything I do pop out is any good so it's very nice to hear your comments,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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