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0 posted 2001-04-20 03:10 PM



Listening to your music
Following along
to the beat of your heart
rhythmic, powerful, strong

hearing the words
singing off key
not giving a damn
who looks at me

………lost to the moment
dancing in my blue dress
feeling you watch me
waiting for your caress

song follows song
you find the melody in me
wrapped in your music
my soul flies free


~SEA~

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1 posted 2001-04-20 03:11 PM


SEA....have I said lately....you're getting better and better?
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2 posted 2001-04-20 03:13 PM


thank you so much Sunshine!   I was inspired    SEA
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3 posted 2001-04-20 03:56 PM


beautiful music for the ears and eyes....lovely images you paint...


Greeneyes~


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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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4 posted 2001-04-20 04:07 PM


Who said I sang off key

It is such a pleasure to read your work.  I never fail to smile, think, or take a VERY cold shower

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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5 posted 2001-04-20 04:22 PM


wow...WOW. Inspiration indeed, he must be a lucky guy.
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6 posted 2001-04-20 04:23 PM


Green Eyes~ thank you ....

Interloper~ you give me such smiles.....and warm fuzzies.....thank you so so much  

~SEA

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7 posted 2001-04-20 04:25 PM


PK~ sorry sweetie, you snuck in there....I think he's wonderful...thank you for the wows    SEA
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8 posted 2001-04-20 04:38 PM


Sea,

     Isn't it good to be inspired   You're lucky to have that.. I liked this poem.. gives a free feeling  

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9 posted 2001-04-20 04:56 PM


SEA...."..they wore gray, you wore blue.." (paraphrase from CASABLANCA) Great movie...Great poem. Bob  PS Great dress!
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10 posted 2001-04-20 09:37 PM


An easy moment to get lost in...loved this!
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11 posted 2001-04-20 11:43 PM


music is especially special when it's shared... i share mine with special people in my life.......

someone once told me that if poetry is the lyric of the angels, then music is the song of god....

i spend almost all my time online downloading music from napster and sharing it with someone special to me ....and i'm starting to play the piano again, too, and the guitar... and writing some, too....
at last count, i have almost 12 hours of nonstop music... on my computer.... and i love every note, every phrase of song, every lyric.... it's wonderful!!!!

music is very special and your poem reflects that..... thank you for sharing this...


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12 posted 2001-04-21 12:14 PM


SEA, your heart is showing again. . .  

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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13 posted 2002-03-24 06:23 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, such music of romance always chants from your words, sweet friend, may you forever be wrapped in his music and may he chant to your heart in true love like a choir of angels forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sweet music to all our ears! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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14 posted 2004-04-21 03:54 AM


very light hearted and joyful
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