Open Poetry #13 |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind ![]() |
I've left my books open for you to read by candle light, To read you softly asleep in your restful days when Fire danced upon the walls from the cobblestone fireplace, as the wood crackled, and sparked In a shadowy night fear of the unknown bother my eyes trying to sleep The winds rustle the leaves outside, my window I feel frozen, searching for warmth as the toss and turn begins The clock ticks slower at 3 am with each second the annoying sound, tick tock tick toc, tic, to, ti, silence becomes A whisper voice, in my mind there only faintly My eyes were blinded wide shut, to the sight & sound Of a pillow lover that haunts my nights Sitting in the shadows by candle light Reading open books ![]() ***** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-16-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely! |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I must say that I truely did enjoy this....... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Well, as they say- Reading is FUNdamental.. nicely done.. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
![]() On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very nicely done, Lauren. I love the smiley at the end! ![]() All writing comes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My eyes were blinded wide shut, to the sight & sound Of a pillow lover that haunts my nights Sitting in the shadows by candle light =========================== feeling every line of this... and know that 3 am ache oh so well... beautiful in its bittersweet intend. keep those candles burning... much will be discovered in the light. ![]() tis never easy being a moth, |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, I see each dying day and the birth of yet another. Yes, I'm an insomniac. This is lovely, sweet one. Your work shines, my friend. It always does. Michael Proust- |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
thanks to one and all for reading and sharing your thoughts with me.... ![]() my best to you all....hugs and peace... Greeneyes~ ******* Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and in those books. . . we find. . . well, you know. . . ![]() I love this one Lauren. . . it's excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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confetti Junior Member
since 2001-04-12
Posts 33 |
Of a pillow lover that haunts my nights. I could feel that one. I like your poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Aha...one of those pillow lovers...James |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Excellent job....I love ur poems Greeneyes I love to nice poetry. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
thanks...to all for stopping by to read, it is appreciated.... ![]() ![]() ![]() Greeneyes~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Sleep with comort & rise fresh. Nice poem. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Nice way to fall asleep. I enjoyed the poem. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
very enjoyable ![]() |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
thanks for all the kind replies and comments...I appreciate you all much... Greeneyes~ |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, I hope it is a peaceful sleep. For the read here by the fireplace indeed is enchanting. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
repost! repost! |
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