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Open Poetry #13

sunshine....(cinquain)

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

0 posted 2001-04-20 11:41 AM

sunshine
sneaks across floors
and up flowery walls
stealing precious dreams of you, damn
sunshine

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-20 11:50 AM

I can't blame my waking on the sun.....I have to blame it on that darn alarm clock.....

I liked this very much Mike

SEA

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

2 posted 2001-04-20 01:38 PM

damn alarm clocks!!! Thank you SEA. *S* (whoops!!!...DARN alarm clocks!!!)

Mike

[This message has been edited by Packratmike (edited 04-20-2001).]

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2001-04-24 11:24 AM

nice imagery

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

4 posted 2001-04-24 12:49 PM

faterider....thank you for digging this one out from under the pile. These things sink so fast in this forum. Glad you liked it.

Mike

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2001-04-24 10:23 PM

you are welcome..we all know the pain of having our efforts neglected?

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