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Open Poetry #13
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juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 66
ontario canada
0 posted 2001-04-23 10:01 PM

I look back into the past
and wanda how life lasts
and hide my self in masks
with fake smiles
and litle laughs
like Bullworth turns to prass
my life is full of dust
it gets thiker like the dust
to clean it is a must
im feeling kind of lost
my time is running pretty fast
and I'm feeling kind of ungry
cause i cant acheve my heavens
i see my love and heart just past
and its the life
that resurected from the past


© Copyright 2001 juan pablo rodriguez - All Rights Reserved
Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
1 posted 2001-04-24 09:46 PM

Very thoughtful poem.  i enjoyed it very much!

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*
juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 66
ontario canada
2 posted 2001-04-24 10:18 PM

thanx 4 ur opinion ........sincerelly yours JUAN
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