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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Forgive blackest ink, pallid soft whispers misplacing hearts ideal dreams emerge holding fast to truths spoken, reality holds fastens our lips so lift of hand, beckons take again this heart to yours forgiveness complete |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
These are wonderful!! So soft........  SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Complete forgiveness. Next to love, the greatest treasure on earth. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
like feathers against my cheek - - poetry I could read over and over |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sea, Interloper, Mr. Yeats, thank you all for reading. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved Wilfred's comment, and yes he is so right, it was so soft and gentle and a "keeper", which I thank you for as I don't keep many. ~*~ If the want a rainbow ~ you have to put up with a little rain ~*~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lady, OOOOOhhh how I love this!!!! I just love the haiku form.. and you did it beautifully  TaraB |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
as it should be. . . wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you all for taking the time to read this. |
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