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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-04-27 12:12 PM

With the passage of time
Comes the deepening of love
Like the darkening day
In the setting of the sun
Changing shades of colored sky
All fading to blackest night
Holding steady, all feelings the same
Constantly avoiding the light

But she, in my arms remains
As the blissful sleep enfolds me
I trust my soul to her
So in the morning I might see
And behold all that I am
With an opening of her waking eyes
After a night like this I wonder,
Will the sun ever rise?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-27 12:19 PM

For your sake, the Sun shall find an eclipse....

so that you, and she, may enjoy that much more, that much longer....

well done!

Coco
Junior Member

since 2001-01-28

Posts 48

2 posted 2001-04-27 12:26 PM

PK, your poem is stunning in beauty and penned with much love...
A captivating read one I shall not forget...
Thank you
*~coco~*

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-04-27 12:32 PM

1derful! Yes, someone once said "the sun also rises." I guess that means it rises in addition to setting. Let's hope like sunshine said. After all, she's in charge of that gr8 orb

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-04-27 02:02 PM

With the passage of time
Comes the deepening of love
Like the darkening day
In the setting of the sun
Changing shades of colored sky
All fading to blackest night
Holding steady, all feelings the same
Constantly avoiding the light
=================
I trust my soul to her
So in the morning I might see
And behold all that I am
==================
After a night like this I wonder,
Will the sun ever rise?
==================

written with such a feather light pen..and gentle touch ...
that one can feel the quiet constant of the night...
can hear the sun light break the dawn
can hear the sighs of content...
excellent imagery laced emote here PK
beautiful poem and sentiment

Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-04-27 02:12 PM

Oh what a night! Too bad the sun had to rise. Thanks for sharing this tender poem.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-04-27 04:52 PM

Here's hoping for endless nights.....

this is so beautiful! That is one lucky lady.....

SEA

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2001-04-27 05:08 PM

This is very pretty. Yes, the sun will rise, and that makes the nights even nicer. Joyce

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