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Will The Sun Rise?
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Will The Sun Rise? |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
With the passage of time Comes the deepening of love Like the darkening day In the setting of the sun Changing shades of colored sky All fading to blackest night Holding steady, all feelings the same Constantly avoiding the light But she, in my arms remains As the blissful sleep enfolds me I trust my soul to her So in the morning I might see And behold all that I am With an opening of her waking eyes After a night like this I wonder, Will the sun ever rise? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For your sake, the Sun shall find an eclipse....  so that you, and she, may enjoy that much more, that much longer.... well done! |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
PK, your poem is stunning in beauty and penned with much love... A captivating read one I shall not forget... Thank you *~coco~* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! Yes, someone once said "the sun also rises." I guess that means it rises in addition to setting. Let's hope like sunshine said. After all, she's in charge of that gr8 orb  Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
With the passage of time Comes the deepening of love Like the darkening day In the setting of the sun Changing shades of colored sky All fading to blackest night Holding steady, all feelings the same Constantly avoiding the light ================= I trust my soul to her So in the morning I might see And behold all that I am ================== After a night like this I wonder, Will the sun ever rise? ================== written with such a feather light pen..and gentle touch ... that one can feel the quiet constant of the night... can hear the sun light break the dawn can hear the sighs of content... excellent imagery laced emote here PK beautiful poem and sentiment Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Oh what a night! Too bad the sun had to rise. Thanks for sharing this tender poem. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Here's hoping for endless nights.....  this is so beautiful! That is one lucky lady..... SEA |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is very pretty. Yes, the sun will rise, and that makes the nights even nicer. Joyce |
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