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And Beyond |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Beyond A Look Through hours of darkness unappeased The touching memories seduce her mind Her body craving from want of he No restful sleeping can she now find Stolen, the looks from her were seized. Beyond A Kiss A kiss of air, she leaned in twice A gentle stroke, his hands, her face And placed on lips, his tasting nice Combined they were of leather and lace Once heated, looks could melt the ice. Beyond A Feel Beyond his movements, touching light Sensations, rise to fever then The pleasure gates release with might To nourish, feed, to bloom again She dreams her real in dark of night Beyond The Real Against the rails she leans, a show Waits patiently, each morn to rise With softened curves, concealment though Of lace wrapped gift, to pleasure eyes Then dreams the voice, as time moves slow. Beyond a look, a kiss, a feel Timeless now, becomes her real. ~Wynter/M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-20-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Maureen, This is exceptional, I'm very impressed!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Such feeling in your writing is a pleasure to read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I'm beyond words of praise. *S* This is so seductive. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kathleen...thank you for the impressed review...there are times I write my feelings better than others and this is one I happen to have liked also  Marge..you always say the right things huggss Poetic Knight..I have been known to write a sensual poem or two...thank you  ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
An enchanting poem bringing pictures of feminine beauty. |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Passion is the light filtering through your words, tenderly sensuous and enjoyable. Coal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, I agree with all the above. A wonderful write I really enjoyed. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great write Wynter! Reality comes bounding through the mist and makes up the day whether we want it to or not. Many facets of emotion displayed in this wonderful write! |
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