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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-20 05:30 AM



Beyond A Look

Through hours of darkness unappeased
The touching memories seduce her mind
Her body craving from want of he
No restful sleeping can she now find
Stolen, the looks from her were seized.

Beyond A Kiss

A kiss of air, she leaned in twice
A gentle stroke, his hands, her face
And placed on lips, his tasting nice
Combined they were of leather and lace
Once heated, looks could melt the ice.

Beyond A Feel

Beyond his movements, touching light
Sensations, rise to fever then
The pleasure gates release with might
To nourish, feed, to bloom again
She dreams her real in dark of night

Beyond The Real

Against the rails she leans, a show
Waits patiently, each morn to rise
With softened curves, concealment though
Of lace wrapped gift, to pleasure eyes
Then dreams the voice, as time moves slow.

Beyond a look, a kiss, a feel
Timeless now, becomes her real.


~Wynter/M


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-20-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-04-20 07:12 AM


Maureen,

This is exceptional, I'm very impressed!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-04-20 07:22 AM


Wynter~
Such feeling in your writing is a pleasure to read.
~*Marge*~

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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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3 posted 2001-04-20 08:59 AM


I'm beyond words of praise. *S* This is so seductive.
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2001-04-21 09:19 AM


Kathleen...thank you for the impressed review...there are times I write my feelings better than others and this is one I happen to have liked also  

Marge..you always say the right things  huggss

Poetic Knight..I have been known to write  a sensual poem or two...thank you  

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
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5 posted 2001-04-21 11:48 PM


An enchanting poem bringing pictures of feminine beauty.

Coal Surrender
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since 2001-04-01
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6 posted 2001-04-22 09:36 AM




  Passion is the light filtering through your words, tenderly sensuous and enjoyable.

                   Coal

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-04-22 09:45 AM


Nakd,
I agree with all the above. A wonderful write
I really enjoyed.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
8 posted 2001-04-22 09:51 AM


Great write Wynter!  Reality comes bounding through the mist and makes up the day whether we want it to or not.  Many facets of emotion displayed in this wonderful write!
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