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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-04-21 10:25 AM

Pile it on
creams, colors, & powders
pile it on
perfumes, lotions, & potions
soak it in...
beads, bubbles, & auromas
wash it on...
gels, soaps, & scrubs
finished?
you're beautiful
how your hair shines
your face, divine
your body, sublime
you've covered everything
except
who you are inside...

-Tier{R.T.}
1/20/99

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-21 10:31 AM

my face is clean
my nails, unslicked
my eyes, serene
no makeup, thick
my hair just washed
I squeak in sheen
my soul, uncovered,
I know what you mean.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2001-04-21 10:43 AM

wow! Loved the poetic comment, Sunshine

Keep on shining brightly! *smiles*

-Tier

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

3 posted 2001-04-21 12:01 PM

Applauding! I'm guilty. *sheepish smile*

I love reading your writing again, R.T. Stick around!

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-04-21 12:57 PM

YES!

Truth stands clearly!

I love it!

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

5 posted 2001-04-21 01:06 PM

my ex girlfriend hated makeup

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2001-04-21 03:04 PM

ah...but all of those things should be used to enhance...not to cover---it's like the old saying--you can run, but you cannot hide! Loved this!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-04-21 04:43 PM

Just A Woman, thankies!! you've got to be Kellie, am I right?  *smiles & hugs*

Temptress, Thank you! I think the messages applies to us all at one time or another! I wrote this when my teen thought she needed to add a lot of unnecessary items to her already beautiful appearance. Thankfully, she's looking at her entire person now.

Eagle Scorpion, you know, sometimes less or none is more!  *smiles*  thanks for reading and commenting!

My point exactly, Serenity, I love soaking in citrusy bubble baths and gels. *Chuckles*  We, need only remember the secret person of the heart.  Thanks for reading and commenting!

-Tier

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-04-22 02:25 AM

perfect Tier. . . I love this one. . . it speaks a truth that we all need to hear. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

9 posted 2001-04-22 10:15 AM

Tier....Well said. Bob

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