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Open Poetry #13

capture

Sami
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-04-19 10:09 PM

my face burns with
sadness as i leave you
behind.
my heart feels already
a profound longing
for you
and i feel sick
at the idea that i am
leaving you.
you, so deeply etched
into my mind,
have begun to
capture my heart.

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-04-19 10:50 PM

Just wait, it gets worse...and harder to leave. Related much.

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Sami
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-04-20 09:20 AM

thanks for reading this

it already is getting harder everytime to leave...
~Sami~

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2001-04-24 10:57 PM

i liked the way how your title effectively summed up your poem...good job...

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