Open Poetry #13 |
Whispers With Anne |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Whispers With Anne ~*Marge Tindal*~ I cowered in whispers within the confines of the darkness. Clung to the others crowded in fear. Let my heart whisper the prayers, I couldn't say out loud. Offered others my tears to quench their thirst. Aspiring to be a writer - in the someday that never came. Looked fear and death squarely in the eye ... and prayed again. My God finally heard our prayers. He took us home to be with Him ... Before the gases from the chambers of death snatched us from life, we whispered our tears so that generations to come wouldn't have to. Oh, God ... have mercy. Their tears are my tears. Help me to shout ... so they won't ever be forgotten. Stirred again by the reading of 'The Diary Of Anne Frank' *A loving remembrance to the victims of the Holocaust* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
This is extraordinary and breath taking.. we cannot forget the past or else we are doomed to repeat it..God bless you for this write. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Prayers of silence....so touching you are....silently my heart weeps...thank you for this Marge... sincerely Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I too was touched like this, by reading ...and yet I didn't say outloud what you have said with such heart...thankyou for this, Marge. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Frankly, Marge, this is awesome.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Marge ~ thank you from the bottom of my heart for this reminder ~ this must never be forgotten ever! A remarkable work as well. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SongBird~ Thank you. This child moves me to tears. GreenEyes~ The stories touch my heart with tears of remembrance. Thank you. Martie~ My friend, I appreciate you. Balladeer~ *Hugs* ... from a sincere heart. Mysteria~ Anne's words speak volumes to our hearts. We CANNOT forget .... ever ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Beautiful, Marge... |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Yisrael Adonai Elohenu Adonai Ehchad (Hear, O Israel, the LORD our God is one LORD) we are killed for land and faith, our blood runs red, a river of shame. We who seek peace for ourselves break and scatter. Gentle treatment of history and people. ~ Shalom, Julian. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Glad you shared this Marge...fantastic writing...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well what is this....everyone intent on making me cry today? Marge, this was a wonderful tribute, thank you for sharing the stirrings of your heart.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this shows your versatility as a writer and your compassionate heart... you shine Margie-girl in every line. I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Margie, yes, I always knew that you could write about any topic and stir our emotions. A bittersweet write from you, your heart is so full of caring and understanding for the victims of the holocaust. Thank you for sharing this, and thank you for just being you Take care, Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Thank you so much. Julian~ Yes, One Lord for us all ... So many persecuted for the blood that flowed through their veins ... Bless you, friend. JamesMichael~ I appreciate your reply. Thank you. Karilea~ One could not read Anne's diary without being stirred to tears. Thank you for the read. JanetMarie~ Just so stirred by re-reading and was moved to pen this tribute. Thank you, hon. Melissa~ This heart knows the injustices too well ... and felt compelled to write this one. Thank you for reading it. *Hugs* to all of you for your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
INSPIRING INDEED BLESS YOU MARGE FOR REMINDIND US OF HER COURAGE AND LOVE WARRIOR LOOK FOR SMOKE....... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoaringEagle~ Oh my sweet ~Warrior~ I knew you would find your way to this one. Thank you, love ... she touches my heart and of course would touch yours greatly also. Love you muchly. ~*Maiden*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She longed to be a writer when she grew up but never achieved those years... But the words left behind and poems like this still move us to tears. Beautiful and touching, Margie gal... ya done good! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ I had hoped you would find this piece ... Thank you for your tender thoughts. I feel the poignancy each time I read it. I so appreciate that I got to share it with you. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is so heart-wrenching Marge. I have read the Diary of Anne Frank several times. I understand they are making a new movie presently, about her life. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Marge, had to come back for another read.... I remember long ago....very long ago, when her diary first came to my attention.... how brave I thought this young girl was.... and indeed....brave, and wise. Thanks again! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear Marge, How dear of you to bring her back to our attention. We cannot let this happen again, and remembering will be the way to stop it. Love, Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ Thank you for reading and remembering. I'm not sure I could watch this child's life portrayed ... so sadly tragic were those events in history. Karilea~ To have lived such a short life - she certainly left us a legacy to remember. Thank you, friend. Joyce~ Her life sure is worth remembering~ I hope we never allow such tragedies to take place again. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
marge, i felt the colour rise up in my face as i read this one...and this reminded me that i really should get hold of a copy soon... thanx for the read...i am sorry for not replying to your senryu message but i was in the midst of exams...will check your work out soon.. thanx for taking up that challenge..much appreciated [This message has been edited by faterider (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetKaile~ Thank you for taking the time to read this one. I appreciate that you would want to read Anne's diary ... Please do and it will stir you like you've not been stirred for a long, long time. Thank you again, dear poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, I honestly have to say that this is some of your best writing. I've read her story many times and you've captured her well. Excellent, my friend. Michael Proust- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ Thank you so very, very much. When these stories climb into my heart they usually end up in my inkwell. I appreciate your comment. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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