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Open Poetry #13

Happiness In Her Smile

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-04-28 09:44 PM

Happiness In Her Smile

Looking into your eyes
was encouraging to me.

I noticed some possibilities
that I never noticed before.

And when you smiled it felt
like I was with my best friend.

I'm coming back into your arms
and I hope we will always be friends.

Jameslee@April28,2001

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-28 09:46 PM

Another winner, Michael. Joyce

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-04-28 10:19 PM

JamesMichael~
Sincerely felt ... it shows.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

3 posted 2001-04-29 02:50 AM

soooooo poetic. Lucky girl.LP

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2001-04-29 10:48 AM

'And when you smiled it felt
like I was with my best friend.'

Great lines here, James...very romantic. I just love that feeling too! Wonderful write!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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