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John Yaws
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0 posted 2001-04-19 03:37 PM


McComas rode into Laredo-
Dusty and tired from his trip.
Ahead lay the Rio and  safety-
Survival hung low on his hip.

Bearded and trail-worn, and hungry-
He pictured a bath, and hot meal.
And maybe a bed at the hotel,
Not knowing the hand fate would deal.

They called him an outlaw, a killer,
I guess the shoe fit him, it’s true.
The Post-Civil War down in Texas
Produced them, and more than a few.

A posse rode hard close behind him-
To linger meant swing from a rope.
Ahead lay the border and safety...
To cross it was his only hope.

His bath and his meal came so easy-
But sleep from his presence had fled.
He lay there for nearly an hour,
He tossed and he turned on his bed.

He thought, “Just a drink cannot hurt me-
I think it might help me to sleep”.
In the heart of a gunman and killer...
You seldom, if ever, find peace.

At the bar stood another, much like him-
Another poor waif of the West.
She went by the name “Billie Blossom”-
And life had not dealt her the best.

She was hardened by life and consumptive.
Said, “Buy me a drink”? With a smile.
It was love at first sight for two drifters
And pleasant the hours they did while-

To watch them was like watching youngsters...
Exploring their first puppy-love.
They talked of a home-life and children-
A killer and one poor soiled-dove.

The hours were gone ere they knew it-
Like time, now, McComas must flee.
He said, “I’ll wait for you there by the river-
Together for ever we’ll be.”

His heart filled with hope, now, and joy-
He hurriedly went for his horse.
Billie was packing her things up-
Not knowing of life’s fateful course.

He stepped from the barroom precisely-
When the posse drew rein in the street.
The sheriff, they say, wasn’t looking his way-
The man he had hoped not to meet.

They say that he spoke, ere the guns fired.
“Here, Anse, I standing right  here”...
He’d still be alive, but who wants to survive-
By killing brave men from the rear?

At dusk when the funeral procession-
Returned from it’s trip to Boot Hill-
A lone mourner knelt my his head stone,
Her face streaked with tears, sad and still.

Young Billie, still mourning her lover-
Reached into the bag at her side.
The derringer spoke, the silence it broke-
And there on his grave Billie died.

They tell me that down at the river-
Their laughter is heard on the breeze.
Their still holding hands, and still making plans
Of children, a home, life at ease.

Don’t mock if you’ve never gone down there-
I have, and they're there without fail-
McComas and Billie have found peace at last-
Down there at the end of the trail.





[This message has been edited by Gunslinger (edited 04-19-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-19 04:27 PM


Well, slap my chaps!  This is GREAT!
suthern
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2 posted 2001-04-20 12:27 PM


Great story, GS... and you've told it well! I really like these lines... the honor shown here, the love for Billie and the loneliness all combine to give this outlaw so much heart. *S*

"He’d still be alive, but who wants to survive-
By killing brave men from the rear?"


inot2B
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3 posted 2001-04-20 12:38 PM


Yep, you definitely can hear the laughter as the wind blows through those old mesquite trees.
Gunslinger this brought a shiver down my spine while reading it.

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4 posted 2001-04-21 10:36 PM


Gunslinger:  As usual, this is a terrific tale! I haven't been reading much here, as I am posting to Spiritual Journeys and The Corner Pub, so I'm really glad I caught this one.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2001-04-22 09:39 PM


Fantastic writing, John.  Excellently done.
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6 posted 2001-04-22 09:55 PM


...and who ever said a little posse never hurt anyone? Ya never know...

an excellent saga, 'slinger, as you can always do so well.....

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