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Songbird
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0 posted 2001-04-18 09:48 PM



The Anniversary

She is stunning in white
He is handsome in gray

Aged hands entwine
Capturing the moment
When promises were made

Now older and wiser
Yet with eyes
Still twinkling with love

No one need ask
Did this love last?

© Copyright 2001 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2001-04-18 10:18 PM


Stunning write, songbird.  We should all be so lucky some day.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

thecraig
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2 posted 2001-04-19 06:47 PM


A vision I cherish . Nice poem.
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3 posted 2001-04-19 07:08 PM


This is breath taking.  Very nicely done!

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2001-04-19 07:27 PM


And I hope they know how fortunate to have the chance to grow old together.  Love, Joyce
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5 posted 2001-04-19 11:57 PM


SongBird~
Precious - Precious - Precious !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-04-20 12:55 PM


This left me with sighs of wishing... and smiles for their happiness. *S*
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7 posted 2001-04-24 11:03 PM


this put a smile on my face...we all should be so lucky...
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