Open Poetry #13 |
Memories On My Lips |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Flavors on my lips Memories of kisses shared My tongue lingers there |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
me likes... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
ooooh, yes, me likes this too Very well expressed, especially the last line!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Sweet memories!!! |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Excellent! I loved this! "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Very effectively done. I like the thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Karilea...lol good!!! Melissa...guess I did something right here huh? thanks inot2B...sweeter when shared...thanks JustAWoman...thanks very much Marge...Im glad you like this...thanks |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I imagine I have lots of memories on my lips also...James |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Paula, that last line is a killer. Parker |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...I thought you might like this one... Parker...you like that huh? Feel free darlin to use it... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Sounds like a very tasty kiss..... Bernie A a day keeps the world 'G Bernie Slicker |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
oh yes. I like a lot. The lips are the most beautiful things, next to the eyes that is. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Bernie...well come find out for yourself...hehehe PoeticKnight...especially when one devotes enough time exploring them...thnaks |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hmmm...yeah...I'm with ya on this one! Great write! sp to be with you... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
sp...thanks sweetie.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh you've been kissing someone that tastes extra special.......fun ain't it? Good one Paula! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Gotta love that last line! You do these so well. Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ethome...maybe just dreaming of that kiss JLR...thanks sweetie...sometimes they are all that comes when I put pen to paper |
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