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| Open Poetry #13 |
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Illumined |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
IlluminedIn darkest vale where arms no longer hold me, I write to light with words that fail to sing. Don't waste them wringing warmth, a letter scolds me. Time cannot linger where the heart might cling. But how to climb above the grief of treasure tossed back into the churn of swirling sea, when memory's song repeats each precious measure with echoed strands of night enfolding me? I'll not begin to know till breathing ceases and once again my love in light appears, what comes when pain subsides and peace increases, illumined, whole, in joyful joining tears. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Claire....this is so very beautiful! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Poetically perfect, Claire!!!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Meadowmuse - a beauty you have written, I read and liked very much. BC |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sunshine, Balladeer, Bill, thanks very much. (o: Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Poetry at its finest, Claire! I am always swept up in the emotion of your writings. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Denise, I'm glad it "swept" you. (o: Thanks for reading and enjoying. Take care, Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
No one does it better than this...do you submit your poetry to magazines or something? You should... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
so few here - pen 'perfect' poems every time I wish I were one - - but I'm most grateful Claire IS you did it again |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
So enchanting, and so very well constructed. Coal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Claire, Excellent writing. You are one of my favorites. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I will always find wonder in your words my friend. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Clair this is fantastic...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Reading this on the suggestion of another poet, and so sorry I missed the time you were here. This is poetry at its best, and hoping you see this and come back to Passions and write some more for us. In the meantime will read your other posting with sheer enjoyment. Perfect rhyme! |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
This is beautiful, agreed. Miss you meadowmuse! |
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