Open Poetry #13 |
Untouched |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I'll hold my breath until the end, when I will see you in your true ways. No sense in passing this opprtunity, I will endure because I need to know. I might get dizzy. I might get heart pains. But my love is here at stake. Risking it all, for you to show me if your love for me, remains untouched. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow. Good luck my friend. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
i love the way you worded the ending, if your love for me remains untouched...that was great. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes you've wondered long enough and just have to know. *S* This is great... good luck! |
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