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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-04-14 02:40 AM


There I am
lost in zeroes
Oh...I am a bad, bad girl
I did not
play a sweet hero--
I ignored the pressing URL...

So sorry, that I'm not the one.
And this, suppose, is my undone,
forgive my bitterness of tongue--
outside the box is a cruel world.

*had to come back to edit---with thanks to all who gave inspiration--I'm around.   *

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-14-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
bslicker
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1 posted 2001-04-14 02:46 AM


ok, lost me on this one... guess i have to read a few more times.
Bernie
a smile a day keeps the world in  's.

Bernie Slicker

doreen peri
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2 posted 2001-04-14 08:34 AM


sorry, serene-one... i didn't follow this but i'm glad you came back... "lost in zeros" is a cool concept...

not a great week all the way around and
"outside the box is a cruel world.", indeed, but it's the real one and there's a good life out there for all of us... we just have to make it happen

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3 posted 2001-04-14 08:59 AM


yes, it is a cold, cruel world out here. . . but we have to come out from it sometime. . .

good work. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

VAS
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4 posted 2001-04-14 09:05 AM


So, is what you're saying:

you found no serenity in cyber love?

If that's your message, you did it, girl!

spiked
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5 posted 2001-04-14 06:48 PM


Don't usually reply to the ones that lose me but you seem to have done so with everyone with this one. Only thing I can think of is you have gotten lost in computer code or something, Guess I'll have to wait for the transcripts on this one

Rich

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6 posted 2001-04-15 01:59 AM


We all can get lost in this mad mad computer world. Thanks for this cool post!!
serenity blaze
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7 posted 2001-04-15 04:12 AM


Bernie...it was supposed to leave ya feeling "lost"   Thanks for reading!

lucy...yep...well, yeah...the "lost part" we all know from time to time..but the zeroes? Yep, both binary and circular...on to infinity...HUGS you.

Sven? ain't it though. So glad I have this sanctuary...thanks!  

Yes, Virginia...that's a good interpretation too! Thank you, my friend, as always for reading!

Rich...I never truly worry about your capacity for understanding. Thank you, most especially!  

Brad...thank you as well, I hope to catch up on some of your work soon.

Happy Easter, to the forum. Please know my silences were not from lack of interest. Hope to be catching up with you all soon!


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8 posted 2001-04-15 04:16 AM


And so I am, and not only by your write...
Bernie
A smile a day keeps the world in   's

Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-15-2001).]

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2001-04-20 03:03 AM


sorry for the confusion Bern...but zeroes never did add up to much for me!  
Thanks!

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10 posted 2001-04-25 10:58 AM


So sorry, that I'm not the one.
And this, suppose, is my undone,
forgive my bitterness of tongue--
outside the box is a cruel world.

Hey, gal! *G* You writing my theme song? LOL. This verse I understand all too well... it's hard to keep a civil tongue when the only man wanting my attention is the tax collector. *S*

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