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Where The Willow Tree Grows
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Where The Willow Tree Grows |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Where the willow trees and The blue grass touch, Sits a still shadow As soft light fills A heart and reflects The landscape of past Times and future memories You speak of rain dancing, With words stirring my emotion The beauty of your images, your dreams Trap my imagination You speak my heart with Truth, as if you have known Me all your life, as if We were lovers, so Intimate with passion Your syllables drift on the Breeze my heart connects Again to remember, To await I sit to watch the sun roll By, the ocean waves it's Tides to the shore, the union meets With perfect harmony Perhaps now in this surreal Silence, I will find peace, Dreaming keeps us Together, understanding Provides the escape In the grass Where The Willow Trees Grow I Can Always Find You *** Memories find me again" LC **** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 04-17-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You speak of rain dancing, With words stirring my emotion The beauty of your images, your dreams Trap my imagination You speak my heart with Truth, as if you have known Me all your life, as if We were lovers, so Intimate with passion Your syllables drift on the Breeze my heart connects Again to remember, To await ============================ this is sooooo beautiful L, so serene and graceful... your imagery is like a Monet painting your words transport me to a quiet place of momentary content... thank you for that. take care gentle poetess. jm  I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 found another one  peace and poetry. jm I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
WOW! Really enjoyed your painting! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Delicately exquisite ! 'The landscape of past Times and future memories' Ahhh ! Lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dear friend, this is the most beautiful of writings and I shall treasure this one in my personal favorites. LC~ beautiful is as the poet who wrote it. Hugs sweet lady. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A treasure - Thank you so much - I needed this this AM |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very nice! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I do so agree with everyone's reply ahead of me, and just want to say that I always look forward to your writings......they truly are painted with the flow and the grace of the great masters. A gift of your talent you offer us in every work!! Thank you!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful masterpiece of art, Greeneyes. Fully enjoyed this piece, you are, as JM says, a gentle poetess. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I would say that in these words. . . is a place that all of us wish that we knew. . . thank you for showing it to us. . . beautiful. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - this is one of the most beautiful romantic writings I have seen. You write with much emotion and tenderness. It is not often that I am this touched by a poem that I have read. I can't say enought about this one. Just loved it and felt it. BC |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ah, I love willow trees! They were my mother's favorite. Thank you for this. Kathleen Blake |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was beautiful writing, Lauren. All writing comes |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, Your writing only gets better and better. This is wonderful and lovely, my friend. Michael Proust- |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Janet Marie~ what a compliment you give, I know of the place you speak, I find my serenity and peace there as well....if only for that moment... thank you my friend...Mysteria~ thank you for enjoying my painted views, I appreciate your words much... Marge~ my memories find methere sometims, on the landscapes of time...I appreciate you ery much, thank you.... D~ that is a great cmpliment to give any writer, and I thank you....always good to see you around, and writing...be well seet lady... Bill~  you know my dear friend, you make my heart smile...always...be well...and hugs to you...Sunshine~ thank you for taking time to read, I appreciate that much... Sunnyone~ your kind words flatter me greatly, in sincere thanks to you.... Vas~ I am humbled by your reply, thank you my friend....I am so glad you did enjoy... Sven~ It does exist, and I am grateful for you reply....thank you my friend, always... Bill Charles~ I was so touched by your words, thank you kind sir for telling me how this touchd you.... Irish Rose~ if it touched a memory for you then I did my job in writing, thank you for telling me...I appreciate that much... Lone Wolf~ thank you for stopping in to read, with sincere thanks... Michael~ thank you my friend for always stopping by to read, and for always replying as you do... ******** allGreeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I used to love to hang out under those willow trees when I lived in Florida...James |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really love these pics that everyone is putting on here.. They're gorgeous! I really liked this poem a whole lot. You did a very nice job. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a lovely place you find in your heart to write of...thank you for taking me there. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes, A beautiful palette a beautiful painting. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
JamesMichael~ thank you for sharing with me, a part of your past under the Wllow tree...I appreicate that much... Fading Away~ the pics are beautiful indeed...and thank you for taking time to read and reply... Martie~ It was my pleasure...thanks for stopping by... Seymour Tabin~ thank you for telling me you enjoyed... Sincere thanks to all... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very lovely... I enjoyed this one very much! *S* |
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