Open Poetry #13 |
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Scorned Lover's Pain |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA ![]() |
Scorned Lover’s Pain The pain I feel stinging my heart grows more than I thought it could as I realize how you really felt. You didn’t love me like I thought. The past year is now a cruel nightmare. I blush with humiliation and embarrassment At the fool I must have appeared to be. I opened my heart willingly… blindly. Now it cries with disbelief in the knowledge that I was nothing more than a game. That the gentle words and sweet whispers were promises you never intended to keep. My soul cries with predestined pain The future we talked so tenderly about. The blessed marriage of souls we’d share, and the children we’d love and raise, were just words that rolled easily off your tongue. How could I have let myself be so foolish? How could I fall into the trap of thinking that my prince charming has finally come. My heart rejects me, my soul feels lost as I try to figure out how to move on. Move on so alone and disgraced by your broken promises and my broken dreams. TaraB |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
God, I know this feeling....................((((((((((((hug)))))))))))))) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know the disappointment...we want the one we are with to be the right one...better to find out before marriage that it was not a match...James |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you for both replying to my poem. I'm glad you took the time to stop in. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
i am here for you my dear friend *hugs her tight* love ya jesse All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you will move on. . . as we all will. . . wonderful to see you again. . . this is excellent. . . ![]() --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Indeed there are many familiar feelings here, well done! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Indeed there are many familiar feelings here, well done! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
There is no shame in having an open loving heart. May you find someone worthy of it. Joyce |
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